Miyako is a 'nonhuman' girl that her parents send her to an academy were students are taught to fight against ,non humans.' She finds out about this and thinks it is really strange that her parents did this. While in the academy she gets involved with a very important family whose profession is to kill non humans.
Cute story ^_^ Watch how you lay out your panels - sometimes I was confused about which panel I should read first because the layout didn't make it clear. Or you could always add arrows to tell the reader which panel to read next!
I read your story, and you've convinced me. Yeah your story is a different and unique one. It's just a harem comic LOL otherwise.
but I really like it.
I really like your original style to, it's so refreshing to see such a unique style on smackjeeves because everyone keeps copying other's style but yours I really like it.
;D<3 You've made a fan of me.
Good Job, Can't wait to see more.
@Kokkoii-Matoku: thank you very much appreciate your comments very much and soon your coment make me so happy n.n I Will upload a new page soon as possible and thanks and I hope to not disappoint you!!
I'll leave a comment here because I didn't want to post about unrelated things on the most recent page (the mourning page - I'm very sorry for your loss btw).
I think your work shows a lot of promise, but there are two main problems that stick out to me. They can be fixed in future though! Firstly, the panel arrangement often makes it a bit hard to read, and I often didn't know the order of the panels. Try to work on having them flow better! (This isn't on every page though, just a few)
Secondly, I am aware english is not your first language, but I think it would be good if you had someone proof-read your pages as sometimes the dialog sounds a bit off.
Since you asked about humour on my comic - to be honest, I don't think I'm very good at humour myself, so I don't really think I'm qualified to offer advice. But I guess to be 'good' at humour it first helps to watch/read/experience a lot of funny things. I've been raised on Monty Python/britcoms/The Simpsons since I was a little kid, and I experience a lot of different kinds of comedy. (stand-up, sketch shows, slapstick, situational humour, dark humour, gag humour, the many types of humour you can find in different kinds of anime, 'manzai' standup humour...etc! That's all I can really suggest I'm afraid.
Keep up the good work! I quite like your style; it's like a blend of modern and retro shojo.